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Subject: p0etic?
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muhlez 20.10.07 - 12:31pm
h0t sixteenz needz 2 0ccasi0naly uhm... sl0w d0wn da pace... sum tyt p0etry wudnt hurt... *
cashfl0w 20.10.07 - 08:41pm
Define poetry *
muhlez 20.10.07 - 11:36pm
P0etry iz expressi0n using verses. s0 i guess y0l r spittn p0etry. Ya i admit, wr0ng ch0ice 0f w0rds. Thing iz, y0lz verses r just 2 f0ment da eg0... h0w b0wt f0mentati0n 0f em0ti0nz? *
cashfl0w 21.10.07 - 04:59am
You mean love stuff *
muhlez 21.10.07 - 06:09am
No n0t necessarily. u mean 2 tell me dat in all ur lyf, h0weva l0ng u'v lived, u'v 0nly felt l0ve? dude, h0nestly n0w, d0nt b shall0w. All im sayin iz dat y0l cud try xpl0re sumthn... deeper *
kidpro2 21.10.07 - 04:43pm
U frst muhle *
cashfl0w 21.10.07 - 08:12pm
Stop talkin in riddles pls man. *
kidpro2 21.10.07 - 08:24pm
Yea ryt *
muhlez 22.10.07 - 02:05pm
y0l really dnt get it. sumfin deeper... m0re em0ti0nal *
cashfl0w 22.10.07 - 02:10pm
You mean lyk pac *
muhlez 22.10.07 - 02:57pm
i guess u cud use dat as an example. basically all im sayin iz dat y0l shud try rhyme b0wt sumfin m0re dan h0w tyt u are *
d1ss 22.10.07 - 08:36pm
M jst wnderin if2pacwas still alive hw fins gona go *
cashfl0w 22.10.07 - 09:49pm
Her teacher noticin her drop in grades , wants 2 knw wats goin on and wats 2 blame, cant reach her folks cos they hopped 4 days , until she arrives late 2 skul torn top and shades , asked wat was goin wen they saw her face , wita soft tone she exchanged , i tripped on the staircase bruised my hand and my eye , then the teacher replied dats a lie nt da truth , its da total opposite ,i see ur wrist are slit plus i saw note in ur math book, *
cashfl0w 22.10.07 - 09:58pm
So the social worker arrives 2 take her away , cos her mum relies on cocaine 2 break a way , if u looked in2 her eyes ud hate 2 to say , you live beta life. *
cashfl0w 23.10.07 - 05:40am
Is dat it? *
muhlez 23.10.07 - 04:53pm
Yes l0ve, i think u actually ar0usd sum em0ti0nz... maybe c0z im a chiq bt ya, nyc *
muhlez 23.10.07 - 04:56pm
0r d0 y0l want me 2 p0st a p0em? *
cashfl0w 23.10.07 - 06:19pm
Pls do cos i aint seen a chick drop any stuff here on this group. Btw thanks *
muhlez 24.10.07 - 11:26am
first lemme TRY r0ck it UR wae... *
muhlez 24.10.07 - 11:27am
I spit lyrical ish dat b purely venomous/ Poisonous... Rhymz dat b ishtically hectiq i swear dis is serious/ Wae beyond first lady im 2 phly 4 da title/ All dem jaqd up fake nigaz trxna pick a battle/ Supa phly chiqquitta oozin ultra fabulousity/ Perfect combination beauty nd brainz cozez animousity/ Thinkin dey h8n on me, dnt b mistaken dey just envy me/ Wanna be me, im evrythn theyv eva wantd 2 b/ Excuse me 4 crushn u, u jus look so small 4rm da top/ bt i suggest u get usd 2 it coz im not abowt 2 stop *
cashfl0w 24.10.07 - 03:25pm
Dats sum hot sht :) *
muhlez 24.10.07 - 04:17pm
Thanx j0... i still g0tta p0st a p0em th0 *
slimpat 27.10.07 - 09:45pm
I'm not 2spit complex or feed masses vivid msgs wit abstract vocab/ like m satisfyin my own thirst n claim to liberate ppl while concentratin on self../..superiority n exhibitin xtraordinary capabilities only 2be regarded as a nuisance/ by da wise ears/ hiphop is diverse i aint got no vain feelin 4 that, m only against da hypocrity/ wonderin wat happened to da keep it real spirity/ they say money is da main root 4 sin/ while in hiphop criticizm is da main root 4 beef/ i see this world filled by d*mn fools/ dat make use of cunnin speeches like most parliament dudes/ target practicin deceit makin livin out it/ wel it, period... *
cashfl0w 27.10.07 - 10:54pm
But you jus contradicted da fact ur holdin a rap battle ? * scratches forehead* *
muhlez 28.10.07 - 05:41am
Am0ngst using big w0rdz u g0t carried awae nd startd makin up ur 0wn w0rdz lyk hyp0crity nd spirity... then i agree dat u c0ntradictin urself... s0 if i wuz 2 battle, id hav 2 als0 plz da 0pp0nent? *
slimpat 28.10.07 - 10:49am
(Hypocrity, spirity) thats art luv called creativity n its mostly used in hiphop n poetry to create rhythm. AND wo! hold on a sec....b4 things get hectic, i was jus postin my peace NOT in response to ur verse!!... Ag *
d1ss 29.10.07 - 07:21am
I lyk dat yo drop muhlez dats dope yo *
muhlez 29.10.07 - 03:00pm
Plz use punctuati0n marks s0 we can understand *
muhlez 31.10.07 - 05:52am
Y0l r l0sin da essence 0f da t0pic... Sum1 plz p0st sum tyt p0etry 0r shud i? *
raw_ting 31.10.07 - 08:11am
As I Appear From Out Of The Darkness, Its A Battle Through The Thick Fog.. The Streets Are Quiet Apart The Sounds Of Big Dogs.. The Fear Sets In Deep As The Shakes Enter the System, Silent And Violent.. Like Occupation Trident Its Wilent.. As One Life Is Given One Is Taken With Ease.. Crack N c*ke Spread The Streets Like A Ruthless Disease/ Its So Hard To Stand Tall After Seein So Many Man Fall.. How Can It Be? Is Armmagedon Here, Tidal Waves Clash As Thunder Sounds Crash All I Feel Is Fear.. *
slimpat 31.10.07 - 09:30am
Tight one raw....mutch respekt *
raw_ting 31.10.07 - 12:26pm
Cheers dude, was just a quick key *
muhlez 1.11.07 - 08:20pm
Ya ppl lyk if u wanna get a lil' idea of wat im capable of cheq owt my blogz in my syt nd halla @ me *
